我寫果個intro好唔掂也

王文旭睇完後都話我寫得好亂, 今日羅上去同老細discuss, 佢都話好亂, 話我好似講野咁, 諗到果句就寫果句, KT KO就覺得我寫左好多個人comment落去, 同王文旭complain既一樣: 無quote reference, m... 我係要慢慢試下不同既writing organization, 試到一個我自己又鐘意, 人地又睇得滿意既organization.

Intro好似下面咁樣organize得唔得呢?

1. Point form咁list低長詳黎講, topology modeling有咩困難
2. 簡單提下而家有咩model, 佢地點樣去解決or suffer緊以上既困難, 詳細既就refer to Section 乜乜
3. 提出我點樣解決以前既困難: 搵empirical evidences support optimization driven modeling approach

咁OK唔OK呢? 聽日返學校改下先~ 哈哈而家無拿拿搵到個5月頭deadline既conference, 有時間去試寫也~ hehe